52 weeks of Gratitude .. Week 2 is here and the the topic is Spouce / Significant other ..
I am not sure if this will be or can be considered a post BUT instead of writing a post , I want to put a song here as a musical gratitude
Ki hall hai tera mudat pichon takri hain
main v Badliya howanga par tu v vakhri hain dooron-2 takda reha bula vi nahin sakia main kam dil jeha tere nede aa v nahi sakia likh ke tera naam mein sajde karda rehnda san tu mera naam likh ke kade mitaundi c k Nahin |
How are you – we met after ages
I will look changed and you look different too Kept looking from far- could not call you Me a No-one could not come near you either I would write your name and look at it DID you ever write my name and erase it |
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchda
ohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI |
I am not asking what you think of me NOW
BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN |
Chutti vele appo apne pinda nu Jaana
Tera pata nahin par mere dil ghatda hi jaan jehri thaan ton apne pind ne raah nikharde c jehri thaan te o v apne vaang vicherde C Bulliya vich muska ke tera mur k dekhna oh Jaande jaande nazar aa de naal matha Tekna Oh Ki daassa k pedal kinni parre lagde sun Cycle hauli mere vang chalaundi c k nahin |
School finished we went to our own villages
Dont know about you but my heart kept sinking The place where the roads to our village parted The place where like us -they parted too A smile on your lips when you looked back at me As you went the way your eyes said Bye What can I say how hard the Pedals Felt Did you Too ride your Bicycle slowly like me |
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI | I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN |
Kho Kho volley ball te pid vich firdiya mell diyanVehle period de vich bharah(12) taani khel diyaMainu yaad hai mere vaal eshare hunde cSach dassi ki charche mere bare hunde c
Tere naa te yaad hai menu cherreya kaiyaan ne Mere naa te tenu koee bulaundi c k nahin |
In the games fieldIn the free class ,we went to play outsideI remember your friends would point at meTell the truth what did they say about meMany teased me with YOUR NAME DID anyone call you by my NAME |
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI | I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN |
Paadan likhan veele de zindagi changi hundi haiCharri na latthi na fikar na tanggi hundi haichutkalla ya kahani ya kuch hor sunaude neClassroom de vich student gaane gaaunde neMere jo kalaam OH bahute tere naam ne…Ni tu koi gaana mere bare gaaundi c k nahin | Student life is very niceNo fuss,no end of moneyWe tell jokes and all to each othersSinging songs in the ClassroomsMy most writings are all in YOUR NAME Did you Ever sing any song for me |
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI | I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN |
Khaabare tu aakhe o pyaar nahi kuch hor hi cCharhi jawani di bhul c kuch chir di lod hi cPar aishque shayer bachpan vaang masoom hi rehnde neEk paase vishwas ch hi zindagi kad lainde ne“DEBI” ne kai saal tera naam likhiya taariyan teTu v dass kade hawa ch ungalla vaundi c k nahin | Maybe U feel it was not love but something elseA wrong doing because of YOUTHBUT poets-writers-lovers remain naïve like a Child in childhoodThey can live life on a one sided loyaltyI wrote your name on stars for a LOT OF YEARS Did you EVER write my name with your fingers in AIR |
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI | I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN |
oh ho, very romantic jee. 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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I think that pretty much addresses week 2. Pure desi style and very romantic. Nice one ji.
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Thank you so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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I like the idea. I bookmarked this post, maybe one week I will do it too.
Thank you for the translation…love it
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Thank you so much.. and yes please do it .. 🙂
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Ooh. Well done. 🙂
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thank you debs……
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Aah! Unrequited love… beautifully expressed!
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Thank you SG.
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Beautiful lyrics. ..reminds one of their first love..And the silly things we thought and did back then. When a single glance of/ from him/ her would make our day..The days of innocence left behind…sigh!
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yes .. so true.. but those silly things one always remembers…
sigh indeed
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This is so awesome.
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Thank you so much
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Wow! I loved the song, B
Beautiful lyrics!
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Thank you thank you 🙂
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thanks for the translation Bikram.. nice lyrics!!
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Thank you thank you 🙂
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Lovely lyrics, Bikram!
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Thank you thank you 🙂
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Oh my God! You took so much time to translate everything, you are so nice 🙂
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yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 🙂 Thank you thank you 🙂
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It touches deeply… Thanks for the translation… If you hadn’t given the translation, I would have not understood the poem at all!
TC! Keep smiling 🙂
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Welcome here and thank you for visiting … do keep coming..
Thank you thank you 🙂
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Such touching words 🙂
Must share with spouse 🙂
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Thank you thank you 🙂 so did you share ?
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Your choice of song is very good.
Happy Lohri
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Chowla sir thank you.. how was lohri
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You wrote this song or copied from somewhere? No just curious to know if you wrote poetry too…but very sweet and romantic 🙂 Happy Lohri, Bikram Bhai…
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No no no 8 am not that clever.. you shud know that he he he .. It is a song the one I have attached in the post.. I have just written the lyrics so others can understand. .
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Lovely lyrics. So much nostalgia and yearning and shall we call it — love? 🙂 Great work with the translation, Bik. I think you can pass that off as a post.
I hope you are doing well. 🙂
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THank you so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.. How are you long time no see 🙂 actually i have myself been missing .
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A pakka punjabi post 😀 Reminded me of my University days in Chandigarh and my love for punjabi and punjabis esp. Jatts.. 😛
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🙂 you are from chandigarh MY CITY wowo… I did not know that … 🙂 Thank you so much .. and hey you need to check out some of my old post on Punjab and being a punjabi 🙂
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Who can write like Debiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…….No one!
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yes No one 🙂
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