Day 11- Week 2- Spouce / Significant other

Posted: January 11, 2015 in Bikramism, Musical Monday, My Thoughts., Thinking
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52 weeks of Gratitude .. Week 2 is here and the the topic is Spouce / Significant other ..

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I am not sure if this will be or can be considered a post BUT instead of writing a post , I want to put a song here as a musical gratitude


Ki hall hai tera mudat pichon takri hain

main v Badliya howanga par tu v vakhri hain

dooron-2 takda reha bula vi nahin sakia

main kam dil jeha tere nede aa v nahi sakia

likh ke tera naam mein sajde karda rehnda san

tu mera naam likh ke kade mitaundi c k Nahin

How are you – we met after ages

I will look changed and you look different too

Kept looking from far- could not call you

Me a No-one could not come near you either

I would write your name and look at it 

DID you ever write my name and erase it

mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchda

ohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI

I am not asking what you think of me NOW

 BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN

Chutti vele appo apne pinda nu Jaana

Tera pata nahin par mere dil ghatda hi jaan

jehri thaan ton apne pind ne raah nikharde c

jehri thaan te o v apne vaang vicherde C

Bulliya vich muska ke tera mur k dekhna oh

Jaande jaande nazar aa de naal matha Tekna Oh

Ki daassa k pedal kinni parre lagde sun

Cycle hauli mere vang chalaundi c k nahin

School finished we went to our own villages

Dont know about you but my heart kept sinking

The place where the roads to our village parted

The place where like us -they parted too

A smile on your lips when you looked back at me

As you went the way your eyes said Bye

What can I say how hard the Pedals Felt 

Did you Too ride your Bicycle slowly like me

mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN
Kho Kho volley ball te pid vich firdiya mell diyanVehle period de vich bharah(12) taani khel diyaMainu yaad hai mere vaal eshare hunde cSach dassi ki charche mere bare hunde c

Tere naa te yaad hai menu cherreya kaiyaan ne

Mere naa te tenu koee bulaundi c k nahin

In the games fieldIn the free class ,we went to play outsideI remember your friends would point at meTell the truth what did they say about meMany teased me with YOUR NAME DID anyone call you by my NAME
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN
Paadan likhan veele de zindagi changi hundi haiCharri na latthi na fikar na tanggi hundi haichutkalla ya kahani ya kuch hor sunaude neClassroom de vich student gaane gaaunde neMere jo kalaam OH bahute tere naam ne…Ni tu koi gaana mere bare gaaundi c k nahin Student life is very niceNo fuss,no end of moneyWe tell jokes and all to each othersSinging songs in the ClassroomsMy most writings are all in YOUR NAME Did you Ever sing any song for me
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN
Khaabare tu aakhe o pyaar nahi kuch hor hi cCharhi jawani di bhul c kuch chir di lod hi cPar aishque shayer bachpan vaang masoom hi rehnde neEk paase vishwas ch hi zindagi kad lainde ne“DEBI” ne kai saal tera naam likhiya taariyan teTu v dass kade hawa ch ungalla vaundi c k nahin Maybe U feel it was not love but something elseA wrong doing because of YOUTHBUT poets-writers-lovers remain naïve like a Child in childhoodThey can live life on a one sided loyaltyI wrote your name on stars for a LOT OF YEARS Did you EVER write my name with your fingers in AIR
mere baare hun ki tera kheyal main nahi puchdaohna dina ch dasde mainu CHAHUNDI C K NAI I am not asking what you think of me NOW BUT did you ever love me or wanted me THEN


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Comments
  1. Rachna says:

    oh ho, very romantic jee. 🙂

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  2. I think that pretty much addresses week 2. Pure desi style and very romantic. Nice one ji.

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  3. Novroz says:

    I like the idea. I bookmarked this post, maybe one week I will do it too.

    Thank you for the translation…love it

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  4. Deboshree says:

    Ooh. Well done. 🙂

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  5. Shilpa Garg says:

    Aah! Unrequited love… beautifully expressed!

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  6. sangeeta says:

    Beautiful lyrics. ..reminds one of their first love..And the silly things we thought and did back then. When a single glance of/ from him/ her would make our day..The days of innocence left behind…sigh!

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  7. Akriti says:

    This is so awesome.

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  8. ruchira says:

    Wow! I loved the song, B
    Beautiful lyrics!

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  9. anisnest says:

    thanks for the translation Bikram.. nice lyrics!!

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  10. Rahul says:

    Lovely lyrics, Bikram!

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  11. greenboochi says:

    Oh my God! You took so much time to translate everything, you are so nice 🙂

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  12. sindhoooo says:

    It touches deeply… Thanks for the translation… If you hadn’t given the translation, I would have not understood the poem at all!
    TC! Keep smiling 🙂

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  13. Anita says:

    Such touching words 🙂
    Must share with spouse 🙂

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  14. B k chowla says:

    Your choice of song is very good.
    Happy Lohri

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  15. Found In Folsom says:

    You wrote this song or copied from somewhere? No just curious to know if you wrote poetry too…but very sweet and romantic 🙂 Happy Lohri, Bikram Bhai…

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    • Bikramjit says:

      No no no 8 am not that clever.. you shud know that he he he .. It is a song the one I have attached in the post.. I have just written the lyrics so others can understand. .

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  16. dNambiar says:

    Lovely lyrics. So much nostalgia and yearning and shall we call it — love? 🙂 Great work with the translation, Bik. I think you can pass that off as a post.

    I hope you are doing well. 🙂

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  17. roohibhatnagar says:

    A pakka punjabi post 😀 Reminded me of my University days in Chandigarh and my love for punjabi and punjabis esp. Jatts.. 😛

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    • Bikramjit says:

      🙂 you are from chandigarh MY CITY wowo… I did not know that … 🙂 Thank you so much .. and hey you need to check out some of my old post on Punjab and being a punjabi 🙂

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  18. The 4-feet Wonder says:

    Who can write like Debiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…….No one!

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