Tutde rishte zakham bahut doonge de jaande
Par Zakhman di peed nu sehna aa hi Jaanda
Breaking of relation give deep bruises
But one learns how to deal with them
Tere Dhokiyaan te Jhoote waadiyan ne kita hai adhmoya
Tute te ujade dil de pathar lagde ne pyare hun
Your cheating and false promises have left me half dead
But broken and ruined stones in my heart I like now
Sochan which hain mangdi saadi maut da farmaan
Ik gal da hai yakeen Tere wangu Rab nahin karda dhokha
Mann ne haale nahin marna
You probably wish for me dead
I do KNOW for sure that God is not going to betray me
Mann (me) is not gonna die so soon
Duavan haan Teri lai mangda..
Rab kare dil tere diyan pooriyaan hon har muradaan
I wish for your happiness
May god give you and grant every of your wish
Door kadi jad akali tun hain baithen
Chees tere dil which waar waar eho Uthe
Das ni rakaane tun idan kyun kita..
Far away when you are alone sitting
let there be this pain in your heart which keeps saying to you
Why oh Why did you do this
wonderful composition – not a punjabi but understood this. i hope it’s not personal 🙂
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Thank you os much for that.. and good you understood it , its sometimes difficult to translate from one language ot other but have done now 🙂
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kuch samajh main nahi aaya 😦
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Tried my best to translate it to english .. lets hope you like that 🙂
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Veer The ones who think that way and have left or said that.. its fine .. why think about it. as you say may they live a long life.. A VERY LONG life and each day think of what they did. and I pray that they live a long life too .. and may they have all the happiness but each happiness comes with that thought 🙂
chillax baiji .. I told you lets go and meet up there 🙂 he he he he
hor ki haal chaal and how is Bengalurur luru luru luruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🙂 wink wink
take care and god bless and yes sorry to put it here since you wont respond to your emails .. The people back at the home send there warmest wishes and a Big thank you too.. They have a home to call a home now 🙂
You the Man.. and Rab kare MANN kadi na mare … te maujaan maane ..
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Definitely I second Ajay. Let they live a lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng life filled with regrets that pathar samajh kar heere ko haath se phisalne diya. Any way.. may you receive all the happiness you deserve.
Take care.
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Thanks a lot .. let things be .. jsut let them be … 🙂
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Ajay.. thank you so much. Bangalore was fine met a lof of friends and all is fine..
Thanks for the emails i checked them and not to worry the least i could do. Parents are parents always does it matter whose they are .. Parents deserve respect and all the happiness they can have. Their parents are like my parents so anything i can do for mine i should be able to do with others too. Not everyone is as lucky as me to gain all that love and effection of elders 🙂 and yeah keep it to emails please 🙂
yaar je mann kadi na mariya fer it will be same thing I live too and I dont want that. I want to live till i am happy and then good bye to the world… 🙂
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e lo. sab romeos aise hi kyu sochte hai? even if d party of d secn part is remorseful how does dat change anythin? 😮
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Well me no romeo… Its jist a thought why aak for bad for someone who did bad to yoi. Let them at least have all the fun. And let thwir wishes come true.
It does not chamge anything but hey if it does not matter then it does not matter what I ask for.:-)
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Beautifully translated… 😉
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Thank you so much .. Glad you liked it
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Arre why such a sad song… Koi bhanga shangda type ka song lagao…. 😀
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Bhanhra shangra bhi soon very soon dekte rahiye. Watch the space…
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I so agree to Tan…I always imagine you the bhangda types for some strange reason 🙂
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🙂 Look who is here ..
YEah bhangra is there too but cant do bhangra all the time , Life hits back sometimes or has its way sometime
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Frankly speaking, they may not regret but sooner or later get into company which does the same thing (or more) to them. Its a cycle – a vicious one at that!
Destination Infinity
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Ah well doesnot matter they regret of not.. that their choice.. But yes as you say a viscious cycle .. Thank you DI.. this was not for someone in particular just something penned down some time ago…
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Thank you for the translation. Appreciate it!
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I knew you will ask for it .. so i did it before you asked he he heh e:)
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Ki hoya? Itna senti mat ho yaar 😀
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Kuch nahin hoya ji.. everything is hunky dory and great 🙂
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There is a proverb in Tamil: murpagal seyyin pirpagal vilaiyum – whatever you do in the morning, will reflect in the evening.
Nicely translated song. Take care, Bikram.
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I get it 🙂 Thank you sandhya bhen.. I am fine and taking care tooooo 🙂
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Beautifully written…. and a truth… too… BTW ..the profile pic is very nice…
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Thank you so much that you think that way .. and yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy on the pic 🙂 he he he he Thank god someone noticed .. otherwise no body did 🙂
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The composition is really amazing. Loved it as it’s in punjabi. Good that you posted the translation as well…:)
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Yeah a lot of my friends dont understand punjabi so translated to english too 🙂
Thank you for liking it
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good you put the English translation. couldn’t have understood the Punjabi original
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Thank you mam, glad.. good ot see you again aftr some time 🙂
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That’s truly amazing Bikram.I loved it.Having a depth that a usual shayri.
Tere Dhokiyaan te Jhoote waadiyan ne kita hai adhmoya
Tute te ujade dil de pathar lagde ne pyare hun…Three cheers here.I share the same feeling.
Good Day!
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Thank you so much. Life I guess is funny 🙂
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Hope things are fine with you!
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Everything is coool, It will take a lot more to get my down or Dead 🙂 he he he he
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Wow. Did you write this Bikram?
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I hope so too.. does it not look like that i wrote
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Loved it!! But why this ‘sadness’ now? Take care, hope alls well
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Thank you so much, everything is cool. Sometimes as i mentioned earlier Life gets its upper hand.. one of those days .. not to worry , it will need a lot more 🙂
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Very senti stuff!!
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🙂 its good to be senty sometimes , he he he
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Loved all
very intensely written, and strong expressions !!!
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Thank you so very much 🙂 glad you found it this way
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Is it a poem or a song lyric? I like the translation,very strong
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its jsut a little poem i dabbled in .. thank you
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Very intense and written beautifully.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Very deep and beautifully worded. Loved it!!
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Glad you loved it Ria.. thanks for reading
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Hey Bikram, You’ve been tagged – http://wordsndreamz.wordpress.com/2011/12/07/playing-favourites-2/.
Will come back to read your post – have a huge backlog to clear 😦
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Thank you so much. and Hope you get through the backlog
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Very well written……..
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🙂 thank you.
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Oh nice words…but so sad! Kya hua….? Keep smiling!
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kuch nahin hua wel LIFE 🙂 thank you for the concern everything is great.
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Well.. I don’t really understand punjabi.. but loved the english translation 🙂
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Well the punjabi is the exact as english he he he so you have not missed anything 🙂
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Reg prev post , i had 3 first thoughts :
1. thats a huge earing !
2. wow .. pink !
3. what kinda pose is she standing in ??!!! those are beautiful curves
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🙂 Thank you so much ha haha glad you liked the curves… and what is pink sorry.. 🙂
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i dont know what to say to this post … it happens … it happens .. maybe someday in future, you’ll feel this was a good thing it happ
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yeah such things happen I know so as you say good will come toooo 🙂
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Beautiful lines. 🙂 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Reading the Punjabi version is so nice, but a bit emotional.
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Chowla sir. glad you liked it .. it means a lot
sometimes its good to be emotional 🙂
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I had read somewhere that ‘Break-ups are results of your future partner’s prayers’… Whatever happens happens for the best.
Keep smiling please 🙂
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Yeah I know that for sure what happens – happens for the best 🙂 Oh you can vouch for that I am smiling always now worries about that he he he 🙂
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its SAD!
emotions very profound…written very well…
Break -ups are generally bad and leaves some memories hard to forget!
I was talking to one of my friends who recently had something similar …he sent me link of a song ,,
which is like hard to hear..I had tears…I dont know why girls do this!!
check this out!
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YEah why do they do that.. sad when it happens .. and worst is there is no sorrow or it seems nothing matters to them .. play with a human heart and go and have a happy life .. Strange
thats why I have felt that people who have a black heart , are better off .. despetratly trtying to have one of those myself now ..
veyr sad song ..
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Fall outs are painful arent they? Lovely poem
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Thank you ritu bhen, Kadi kadi mera v TUKKA lag jaanda hai 🙂
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Mann, enni chheti chala gaya feir ta gal galat ho jegi….naa…mann ne halle nai marna 🙂
Rab rakhha….
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Haanji Galat taan ho jayegi.. Isse lai likhiya ke Maan haale nahin marda .. 🙂 but life is funny too many ups and downs 🙂
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Wow!
tussi te kamaal kar ditta.. 🙂
Hun te mai gawan ”Once More!!” 😀
Loved it!
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SImran you saying this to me is such a compliment to me .. you are such a great writer , I try to dabble now and then .. Thank you so much means lot to me ..
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Hmm..but these experiences do make us stronger and wiser people…..one should just learn and move forward….not get too pessimistic about life. Mere khayal hai ki madiyan naalon changey log zyada mil jandey ne:)
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Yes they do make one veyr strong .. which is good but the quwestion is why do we need such expereinces to be strong ..
Haanji Maadiyaan nallon change mil hi jaande ne ..
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uff ! you scared me with the title!!!!
But, the words are beautiful..thanks for sharing!
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Sorry for that 🙂 thank you for reading and feeling that way …
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That’s a lovely and sad song. Its sad and heart touching song. Thanks for providing English translation.
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Thank you sir for reading and taking your time out… Welcome to this blog .. DO keep visiting again…
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