Gharon aseen Ture si :- Leaving my house

Posted: June 5, 2010 in People, Soch, Thinking

Sajna nu milan de cha ch
Dil which lai ke kinne saare armaan
                       Gharon aseen ture si

(going to meet my other half.. with tons of wishes in my heart , I left my house)

Ki pata si Kisse di , BURI nazar naal lai ke
Ki pata si kisde MAADE bol naa lai ke
                        Gharon aseen ture si

(did not know that someone bad intentions or bad thoughts were with me when , I left my house)

Changa hun rab rakha keh ke
Pata nahin si AJ RAB ne Nahin si suni Ardaas
Shayad aj de dihade Rab si mere naal Naraaj
Shayad aj de dihade Kita hoya koi mada karam si Mere naal

 (did not know today god was busy , did not hear my words , or was angry with me for some reason.. maybe i did something wrong today .. thats the reason god was not listening )

Dil which Cha te  bahut saare armaan laike apne naal
                                                Gharon aseen ture si

(I was going to meet my other half with tons of hope and feeling , when i left my house)

some words that came to my mind when I saw the pics and heard the news … thanks for reading ..

  1. Dhanya says:

    Very beautiful lines. No words, seriously..


  2. sangeeta says:

    sounds like a sweet song…u must upload a sound file…sung in ur voice, of course


  3. BK Chowla, says:

    Thwade emotions dis rae neApne aap nu smhaloji.


  4. sm says:

    beautiful lines


  5. Shas says:

    Beautiful is the only word that could express what i felt on reading it though it may be an understatement. Am sure it must be even more beautiful in punjabi. Thanks for translating it.


  6. Deepak says:

    wow… liked that. i will also try to translate one of my favourite punjabi poem.hor sunao ji ki haal chaal haitusi aye nai mere blog te:-)


  7. Bedlam says:

    That's too cute.. Loved it.. 🙂


  8. rohini says:

    those are really nice lines…:-)


  9. beautiful :)hey, i have got a bit busy with studies, so blog time restricted for sundays. so wont be able to comment much on ur blog.i read the blogs i follow on my phone when i take breaks at the library, but my phone ka internet doesn allow commenting. so plz don mind if u don't get a comment from me on ur blogs. im still readin it 🙂 cheers


  10. *Harman* says:

    beautiful words..keeps up the spirits… and cheer life is full of surprises.


  11. Madhu says:

    wow…amazingly written.:)


  12. Vibhuti B says:

    These are beeutiful lines MANN..Why do u keep saying ur no good? NOnsense! U r wonderful!! 😀


  13. Bikramjit says:

    @Dhanya :- Thanks for visiting and the comment @Sangeeta:- 🙂 yeah right my voice,, you seriously think so .. it will be same as fatta hua dhol .. 🙂 you definitely dont want to hear this I tell you … 🙂 thanks for the wishes though.. he he he


  14. Bikramjit says:

    @Chowla Sir:- Thank you.. its all ok 🙂 thanks @SM :- thank you @shas :- Thank you for liking this, and its weveryone who has commented the reason why maanged ot write .. thanks a ton @Deepak :- yes please do put it on , i would love to read it. Haal wadhiya hai.. te chaal tusin dekh liyo as and when we meet 🙂 I did come to you blog .. check it out 🙂 Thanks for the lovely comment


  15. Bikramjit says:

    @Bedlam:- THanks for loving it.@Rohini :- oh you are back from your holidays .. how did they go .. Thanks for liking the lines @Dr chandana :- Ok Ms busy as and when you get time :)@Harman:- oh yes definitely it is full of surprises.. thanks@Madhu:- thanks for the comment .. @Vibhuti :- Thanks ji .. shhhh dont say it loud a lot of people will say otherwise 🙂 and now that i am on cloud nine-ten — yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy


  16. Insignia says:

    I am late. Held up with work and things. Sorry!!Very emotional and touching. Now what was that got you thinking?


  17. pal says:

    Beautiful lyrics!!! I think our Indian songs are the most meaningful and aesthetic. This morning, I was in a store and the music they had played was RUBBISH!! It was freaking scary.. the words and the thundering-booming sound. Wasn't fit to be called music, I think. Your post reminded me of the beauty in our Indian songs 🙂


  18. megzone says:

    oi hoi ki gall hai :Dekdumm fataaanngggg poem :DSehra baandh ke chal diye humunse jeevan bharka naata jodnena poocho yaaro kya kya saapne snajoye hainajane kitne sajenge aur kitne todne ;)heehehehehe :psoooweeeeee cudnt help from bringing the devil in me :Pkabhi kabhi teh devil comes to fore and the cute-y takes the back seat 😛


  19. very nice very nice 🙂 loved it every bit


  20. rohini says:

    yes i m back…holidays were grt…will share my journey in few days….


  21. @Ritu :- Thanks a lot and the comment has made me wanna write more of those and BORE YOU GUYS he he he he hehe 🙂 @Insignia:- Offcourse you are busy.. and yeah very late 🙂 but thanks for liking, what got me thinking is there in the poem itself …


  22. @Pal:- Thanks for visitning my blog, and for the wonderfukl comment,, please do visit again. Yes our indian culture is so rich and if you listen to some old music and the lyrics they had a meaning.. unlike now.. But words had a meaning and people wrote for a reason .. Thanks for appreciation …


  23. @Meghz:- he he he he Thanks trust you to write it he he he.. and its good to let the devil take the front seat.. THANKS A ton for it :)@gayathri-vishwanathan: thank for liking it.. yeh kya aap bhi one liners pe aa gaye ho.. 🙂 @Rohini:- looking forward to reading the experiences jaldi jaldi


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